Friday, April 17, 2009

Silence

Sometimes it is just right
to let go
To be tired and silent

For silence is a virtue
few possess and fewer exercise
When damage is done,
Not by actions
But by words you say.

Maybe patience is a term
that just gels with silence
Leading you away from the spiral
That goes downwards with words

Its hard to wait
To have to bear your words
Destroying everything that you held true
Not a single fabric left right

Yet, there is no way out
No contemplation; no options
Just the wait and the hope filled with silence.

4 comments:

  1. Silence indeed is a virtue few posses n fewer exercise...jst loved dis line..
    N da way u've related silence wid patience...
    Well its a gr8 job..
    Keep it up..

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  2. Thanks for the comment..
    Really appreciated..

    Do drop in from time to time..

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  3. I often think that this world would be so beautiful if only everyone would remain silence. Isn't it pratik..


    You know what: the best thing that I like about your writing is : I feel dat you write it straight from your mind and heart. You do not search for the words dat would fit. you just write.

    and I like that.
    Well done...(mine personal feeling, no offense whatsoever)

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  4. Thanks mate
    I cant seem to agree more on the effectiveness of silence..

    Just got into a tight spot in class with a teacher just coz I could not keep my silence when I should have.

    And thanks for those words yaar..no offence taken!!!

    Well, i do try to write what i feel, the way i feel..Thanks for understanding:)

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